Joshua "Bear" Jordan
I 'm still just in awe at the things I'm learning that enhances my already deep addiction to the world of The Walking Dead and all my friend and does there within. Excellently written. Beautifully narrated.
...this story was lazy and predictable. Lots of eye rolling plot turns. The narration was good but way to frenetic at times. There was very little of a story with flat characters who I never found myself rooting for or caring about.
Love it; sad when it ended! Reader is massively talented, with the ability to create and persuasively sound like a wide range of characters. Writing is exciting as always!
I would correct the inconsistencies with reality that detract from the substance and flow of the story.
Bob, one of the main characters, is frequently referred to as having been a medic in the Marines, as having been a member of the Marine Hospital Corps.
Marine do not have medics. Marines do not have any medical staff. There is no enitity such as a "Marine Hospital Corps."
The U.S. Marines are a part of the U.S. Navy and rely upon the Navy to provide medical services. The medics that serve with Marines are actually sailors and are proud of that. They have to complete a totally different indoctrination than the Marines that they serve with, and then must be accepted by those Marines. Marines generally love and respect their "docs," but they would never refer to them as belonging to the "Marine Hospital Corps," other than in jest, and every sailor knows the medics belong to the U.S. Navy Hospital Corps. Corpsmen are very proud of this fact as the Hospital Corps is the only corps composed solely of enlisted members in the U.S. Navy and has a very proud history.
To say that a person was a Marine medic and belonged to the Marine Hospital Corps shows that not even the slightest attempt at research was done. Ever hear of Google?
There are a lot of other glaring errors. So, Woodbury plundered a National Guard armory and got a lot of weapons. Good. One of those weapons is an RPG? How the hell would that happened? The RPG is a weapon of Soviet design, like the AK-47, and I can't fathom why a working RPG would be in a Georgia National Guard armory. It doesn't even sound reasonable. Why not research what weapons are actually used by the U.S. military and have the characters employ a LAW or AT-4? It would have been nice if they would Google.
I am really big on details, and there are a lot that are just wrong in this book. It is hard to get into the book when every few sentences there is something glaringly wrong. By the time you try and wrap your head around it the story has carried on, you have lost the train of it, and might as well go and scrub your toilet or do your laundry or trim your dog's nails.
I enjoyed the zombie circus dwarves.
Odd question, seeing as this book already has three sequeal books printed/recorded.
We learn the how and why of this safe haven
The amazing endurance of Lily
The emotion and adrenaline of characters
I wanted to savor it
And I read passages over again
This is the meat of the stories of Walking Dead. You have
To experience Woodbury