she really sucks and not in the good way ;-)
more sex less BS
Becca is simply not very sexy
The narrator's voice, inflection, tone, etc. was not pleasant and kept me from wanting to listen further.
why did I buy this book? Ugh, such a waste of my time. The reader irritated me from the beginning so I put the book down within 15 minutes. But picked it back up a week later to try and get past the "little girl" voice and breathiness. Getting past all the story lead in was a drag and painful as well. Really feels like a woman in her early 20's wrote this. When you finally get to the "intimate" parts they are so text book. There are much better written exotica, yes even on Audible, than this drivvel.
I work out in an all female gym. The other women have been tittering about this book so I had to see what the fuss was about. I don't normally read top 100 books. Now that I have read this I will snicker everytime the "ladies" bring it up. Cause I know their level of intellect is showing.
Absolutely irritating. Hated the breathy pauses and I am not meaning the sex scenes. the upward lilt of all the "Oh My" made me turn this off very quickly.
Save your credits and money. Middle ground. Could be worst and could be better.
she tries to do different voices for the diffferent characters. would be better to have others to jump in for the short brief spots.
no. no. nooooo
I only chose this book because it was on the bestsellers list. I'm not sure why it was. The language was terrible, the characters were not believable and the story was quite boring. It was a turn off. I will not be buying the next 2.
This was a huge disappointment. There is no story, this is far from being an interesting book. I highly DON'T recommend it!
There is NO story.
Samuel Jackson . . . I think he could have made the porn interesting.
IM GUESSING PEOPLE WHO HAVEN'T READ A LOT OF BOOKS, OR SOMEONE WHO IS JUST STARTING TO READ EROTICA (IF THIS CAN BE CLASSIFIED AS SUCH), MAYBE 18 YEAR OLDS OR SOMETHING.
NOT ANYTHING RELATED TO THIS!!!!
SHE SOUNDED SO AIRHEADISH THAT I HAD TO FORCE MYSELF TO KEEP LISTENING TO IT.....I WASTED MY CREDIT!!!!
ALL OF THE LACK OF LITERACY....THIS WAS A POORLY WRITTEN BOOK AND SHOULD HAVE BEEN DELETED OF THE WEAK SEX SCENES AND JUST MADE IT INTO A YOUNG ADULT NOVEL.
IF YOU ARE USED TO KRESLEY COLE, JR WARD, GENA SHEOWALTER OR ANY RELATED AUTHORS....PLEASE DO NOT WASTE YOUR TIME ON THIS BOOK....IT WILL DISAPPOINT YOU SO MUCH THAT YOU WILL WANT TO SCRATCH YOUR EYES OUT THROUGHOUT THE BOOK!!!
It was filth. I am ashamed of this author version of love and intimacy.
It was okay.
Shock. Then I thought that the author must hate women or humanity for that matter.
A better use of literary skills by the writer.
1. Write it better making the narrative more than mundane school girl sounding thoughts. 2. Build the character of the lead female to be something other than pathetic.
The reader did the best she could with bad writing.
Only to give us more ideas about new sexual adventures.
It's funny a person can write with such a lack of talent and sell millions of these books. Just go to show you sex sells no matter what package it is in today. I don't know if we should rate this as corny or horny...
Better reader, a plot, less repetition,predictable
S and M, without a plot,yes
Not worth the time to do so