If you like the kind of book with a female character that goes back and forth with I never want you to touch me - why aren't you touching me, I never want to see you again - why did you leave me, I want this exact fantasy - why did you think I wanted that, you might like this. Drives me crazy, and makes the female character too stupid. This type of relationship is all rules, regulations, dress codes, commands and punishment, and ALL that talking. And safe words - like these people don't understand no, stop, and I don't like that. The story line is a small part of the book, the rest is the female character saying don't touch me - have sex, I don't like this - have sex, never touch me again - have sex, I'm leaving - have sex. Talk about mixed messages.
Eh. I had wanted to read something with serious hotness in it, and while this book did eventually deliver on that score, you have to wade through a LOT of angst from the main character, which is both boring to listen to and a mood killer. It was basically like Twilight but with sex.
This was my first book by her, and it may be my last. Since these books are for grown-ups, treat the readers as such and don't spend so much time trying to convince us through the main character that the DS lifestyle is ok. Girl, if we're reading these books, we don't need convincing. Just tell the story already!
I guess. Since I found a lot of scenes drawn out by unnecessary inner dialogue, it's hard for me to say whether the narrator dragged things out, or if she was just doing a faithful job of telling the story.
Yeah, I wish it had been that good.
This book could have been SO good if so much time hadn't been spent discussing why kinky sex is ok. I really wish the author had skipped the scaredy cat routine and just gone for it. Every time the action started to get good, the author dumped a preverbial bucket of cold water on you by having the girl waffle about her actions. This is an adult erotic novel, not a YA romance. Knock it off already!
The narrator is very talented and great at creating individual characters but she couldn’t save this book.The story was quite a disappointment. There is very little in way of a plot in this book. The story is loosely tied together in order to create scenarios for all the formulaic sex scenes. The lead character is wishy-washy in her thoughts and the pacing of the story is distractingly unrealistic.I knew what type of book I was buying when I made my selection. However, I had hoped it would at least have a well thought out plot and a somewhat realistic relationship to base the steamy sex scenes. I did not finish is this book.
I loved the mystery of who the stalker really was.
Jack. He really fell hard for Morgan and wanted her to be his.
I thought she did a very good job in voicing all the characters.
When Jack tell Morgan that he loves her.
The sex was hot and the plot was strong.
Don't bother with this one, I wish I hadn't. If you are running for your life from a crazy stalker who has shot at you....well, I think that would be the top priority... NOT sex with a stranger! This was just to silly for me.
Say something about yourself!
The story was intriguing. It did it's job at keeping you interested. The narrator was good. I don't think it's worth $22.00... if it goes on sale or you have a spare credit use it.
I will listen to this again and I want more from the author.
It made me blush at work!
Its better than 50 shades.
Mature audiences - please. This is a pretty good audio, the voices and accents are pleasing enough. The story is good, full of fantasy, fear of lossing yourself and steamy sex. Just enough suspense on how and when the truth will come out. I have listened to it a few times and have the other 3 in the series as well. Worth paying for even if you don't have a free credit. More of Jack please!!!
The story line was very thin, it tried to have some suspense but it just didn't keep you on the edge or anything. The author repeats characters feelings/ideas/thoughts WAY TOO much! Come on, we get the picture don't keep beating the horse dead.
I'm not really sure what the primary storyline was supposed to be, finding her stalker or her sexual awakening as a submissive. Nevertheless, there the writer could write some hot scenes, so that helped me get through the thin story line.