total rewrite. stop describing every taste smell feel of everything the characters encounter. Word vomit does not equal good writing.
Yes. Beautifully written. Moves steadily.
Her narrative as the lead character was comfortable. Ovall tone and cadence pleasing.
I am a clay sculptor and an art instructor at a community college. I mostly listen to audiobooks while I work in my home studio.
This book makes me want to stab something.
If you liked Twilight--no, let me rephrase, if you liked the "romance" and the female frailty and insipidity of Bella in Twilight--then give this crap piece of writing a go. If, on the other hand, you like your female protagonists to have half a brain in their head and be fully thought-out characters and individuals, then avoid this excessively long, action less "story" filled with stock characters of no depth and unclear motivations.
I actually kinda liked Twilight the first time around (though it doesn't have enough depth to re-read), maybe because of the pace. A Discovery of Witches does not have any action, at least we haven't seen any 400--I mean 13--looong hours into the audiobook.
At 13 hours, I am about halfway through the book. Currently I detest the main character and simply dislike all the other characters. The vampire love interest is a jerk who treats the main character crappy and keeps secrets from her for not other reason than, I suppose to further the lack-of-plot and "suspense." Except we are told that Mr. Vampire is really nice. Diana is totally impressed with Mr. Vampire for, I guess, being slightly less jerky than everyone else. Diana appears to have no other life or to do anything interesting. Apparently she is a big-shot historian but this seems to be her stock backstory rather than actually interesting in the book.
Mr. Vamp is a scientist. Diana is a witch. She suddenly discovers that she's a super-powerful witch, but doesn't know anything about it and everyone around her, including her erstwhile guardians appears intent on keeping everything secret until after she needs to know about it, like how witches are forbidden to "be" with vampires. Thus forbidden, rebel Diana instantly decides she has fallen in love. Good plan.
For the last interminable space of time during my reading, the vampire has told Diana she has to do whatever he says, the author has tried to get us to believe that Vampires are scary and also amazingly attractive. I don't believe either of them, I'm giving up.
Does something interesting happen eventually? Near the end does the protagonist actually do something or hold a thought in her head that doesn't directly relate to swooning over studly Mr. Vampire? I don't know and I probably never will.
I don't like to give up on books partway through, but I don't think I can possibly finish this one.
Audio book junky... love the audio
Discovery of Witches is one of my all time favorite books. The story is amazing. I could not stop listening. I have listened to it at least 4 times. Well written. can't wait for the next one!
I was always a slow reader! All of my friends would read fantastic books faster than I ever could dream of and then one day my roommate suggested audible! Now I listen every time I get a spare moment! I love fantasy and fiction, stories with layers of connections and a twist in history always catch my attention.
Yes! I have already posted to Facebook and Pinterest about this book!
Its a grown up book caught somewhere between Harry Potter, the Twilight series, and the I am Number 4 series.
She is easy to listen to. The book was long and she kept you interested and attentive to what was coming next!
A Discovery of Witches ~ More Than What You Can See
If Bella were a witch with a doctorate in history, and if Edward was a non-sparkly vampire scientist, then this would be Twilight, only written better.
I am so tired of weak female characters being the love interest of dark brooding vampires. After what felt like 20 straight minutes of this girl deciding what to cook for her date with what should be a blood sucking fiend, I quit. Vampires should be either a: SCARY or b: campy. I love Buffy and I enjoyed Interview with the Vampire and this was neither. I really thought this story would be about witches, magic and something resembling a plot.
For a supernatural storyline with much more intriguing characters, I always fall back on some Dresden Files, but I've also been giving time to the Kim Harrison book series with a witch lead.
Fine. Lulling. Acceptable.
Disappointment. I was intrigued by the main character's initial history and the plot instigator of discovering the unusual book but then it went no where with a romance that didn't make any sense. Just because two characters see each other, does not convince the audience that they are destined to be together, or even that they have any chemistry. That needs to be written in with some witty dialogue.
Maybe I'd like this book if someone edited out the romance.
I was unable to finish listening to the book. Very boring. The story seemed to go nowhere. I was very disappointed.
i love storys about magic with adult humor in the storys like Piers Anthony and Orson Scott Card i also like some sci-fi storys. The storys i like best is : On a Pale Horse, The Lost Gate, Ender's Game, Split Infinity. i do not like short storys.
as you can see kids dont care to much for it.
it is more then just a romance story.
it starts out about a witch, that dont want to be one.
a story of magic... and it starts out about a book she run across and see's it has magic but trys to pass it by... no chance!
to say the least a long story...lol
im waiting on book2. she ends up going back in time by way of magic after she finds she has a lot of power thats breaking out.
ill not say more. to much will kill the story for you...lol
if your not a kid you may like it.
just read reviews and try the simple.
you may get lucky.
if your a kid your likey will not like it.
it has a lot of romance in it too. kids dont care for that. bores them. :)
The book is obviously targeted to Twilight fans, but it is much worse. People who enjoy romantic stories will not find one there, the characters simply meet and immediately fall in love, without any conflict. No one understands really why boy loves girl, because ether is absolutely no reason for him to do it.
Neither it is a vampire or witch story, the characters remind me more of X-Men mutants (there is a lot of talk about DNA) who can fly, throw fire rays, etc. It is ridicuolous.
This book is beyond salvation. The author simply used every dirty trick in the book and was not able to have a story with any pace or thrill. It is just boring.
The poor narrator is good, as usual with audible books, but what can she do to save such a pathetic book?
Apart from the boring pace, pretentious dialogues and flat personalities of the characters, the thing that strikes me most is that the book is racist...against humans. Humans are stupid, ignorant, weak. The vampires and witches are divine. Give me a break.
This was the worst book I have bought from Audible in 10 years. Beware.