A little reality!
Play down the attraction for at least the first few chapters.
Could not listen to more than 1/2 hour. Very poor writing and narration.
I enjoyed the premise, but it got lost in bad dialogue and weird narration. You hear a very (comical) growly "DAMMIT LILLY!" every few minutes it seems.
It had an interesting story line with Ryland's men, the military involvement, the undercover nature of the whole issue.
Nice to finally see how the ghostwalers got started.
Lilly her struggle to deal with her fathers ultimate betray was compelling.
To by the others to get caught up on the series.
Sound quality wasn't as good as it should have been.
I've probably read this book 4 times, the audible version was a great addition. I did not realize how much I had filtered out of the side characters. The alligator tale was so much better with all the voices. I didn't even read the Samari book just got the audible version.
Even a slightyly more talented writer.
Just by reading the book out loud
the story line could have been great
Author seems to have collated this book with a letter to a cheap porn mag.
If it were not for the supernatural part of this romance book I probably would not have read it. The story was good it would have been better with less of the sex/romance.
I downloaded this book because the premise sounded so great. I was a bit puzzled to see it listed as a romance novel and that should have been enough to make me think again. However, I liked the idea of the story so much that I went ahead with it. The story is good. The premise is great. The writing is good too with lots of great plot potential. However, all of this is overwhelmed by tempestuous, 'bodice buster' scenes. When it got to the stage that every scene was being infiltrated by the endless yearning of the two central characters, I gave up.
The narrator Tom Stechschulte makes all the lead male characters in the Ghostwalker series so sexy and appealing I just cant get over it. These books are good but Stechschulte makes them great! I have listened to all in this series, and wish Tom would read more romance type books. He is great.
I thought I was onto something with my initial listen to the excerpt - very disappointed in the shallowness of both main characters and the story line really petered out toward the end - no threads were dangling throughout the material that would have lead the leading lady to her conclusions - she was too busy shagging the leading guy. No worries there - great sex scenes are awesome but the repetitiousness of these and frequency began to drag down my libido rather than spicing it up! Overall a bit of a drag which is too bad cause the actual concept could have gone places and left me panting for the next in the series.
I did not have any interest in the story. I kept thinking to my self how could the main character be so dumb and why the heck would he play the Hannibal when he could get himself out at anytime. I stopped listening to the book in the 3rd chapter.
uh no probably not.
I think the book distracted from the book....
I would have gone back and found a better story plot.