The narration was stilted and awkward but the unforgivable transgression was a boring story.
I normally love stories about strong independent female characters, but the lead was written so blandly and shallowly that I found my mind wandering and not caring at all about her fate or that of any of the other characters.
She sounded as if she was reciting from a grocery list; pauses in strange places, very flat with little expression. Perhaps this contributed to the overall dullness of the entire experience.
I really wanted to be captivated by this story and thus become engaged in a whole new trilogy to enjoy. But it seemed the story went on and on and on with nothing interesting happening, just minute inconsequential details with no characterization, no insight, nothing to make me want to continue. I couldn't get past the first third or so of the recording.
I read all these wonderful reviews of this book and narration and joyfully picked it up hoping for a nice new series to listen to. I could not get past the narration. A good narrator can make or break the story and this one broke it for me. All I could think of for each and every sentence out of her mouth was "Captain Kirk"! She has that same annoying cadence in her narration. BOnes! SPock! I had to return this one. I tried, I really tried, but no dice.
This book is a story about a woman in a mercenary company. The world is a pretty standard fantasy setting - castles, villages, knights, and a dash of magic. The book has its strengths and weaknesses, but I thought it added up to a good story. I'm currently listening to the second one in the series, which should at least tell you that I wanted more after listening to this one.
A large portion of this book is spent describing Paksenarrion's military training, and her subsequent participation in roughly two years of military campaigining. The emphasis is definitely on what happens, instead of on the emotions of the characters. That doesn't mean that there's no character development, it's just that it's mainly done through showing Paksenarrion's reactions to what's going on. As her reactions change over time, you see how she grows.
If you really hate battle scenes in fantasy novels, this isn't the book for you. If you enjoy action and struggle, then it's probably a good choice.
After stumbling along this series by finding Oath of Fealty on sale, I can honestly say I am glad I purchased it all. With flavors of military and political intrigue, this is a tale of Paks growing up and becoming knowledgeable/powerful, and is framed by a beautifully detailed and depicted high fantasy backdrop. While I may have been frustrated with some of the character flaws a few of the characters had, it is indicative of the story's quality that I was so invested in the story to want the characters to behave differently.
The Narrator did a great job differentiating the different characters from each other, making each chapter of the book feel like a vignette from a monologue. She has done a good job with not only this series, but Richelle Mead's Dark Swan series, and the first two books in Sharon Shin's Twelve Houses series of five. Her contralto speaking voice allows her to depict voices for both male and female characters well.
Overall, I'm glad I decided to go back and listen to the first park of the Parksennarion series before continuing on the Paladin's Legacy series. I think this book is well worth a credit, if not an outright purchase.
Without revealing too much of the story, some of the secondary characters die in this book, and a few of the deaths are very poignant. I found it hard to be unaffected while listening to Paks' reaction to losing friends, and then having to deal with their constant reminder.
Only for Elizabeth Moon.
She is terrible. It's like listening to a female Captain Kirk. *shudders*
I have this series in paperback and have read them half a dozen times. I wanted to revisit them. The story is great but by Gird the narrator is bad. In book 2 she improves slightly for the main character and narration but uses a robot voice for some other characters which makes me wince. Sounds like the aliens in Galaxy Quest.
I remember first reading this book, probably near the time that it came out. Trying to figure out how I even stumbled upon it - I finally concluded that it was probably a recommendation from the SciFi/Fantasy book club that I was a member of back then. Seeing that is had been recorded as an audiobook from the Audible Frontiers program, I decided to pay it another visit as I had vague, but favorable memories of the series.
So, enough history - what's it all about? Well, it is a bit of a different twist on the hero's journey. Paksenarrion starts off as a young woman who runs away from home to escape an arranged marriage that she has no interest in. Thanks to stories from her cousin, she races off to learn to be a fighter in a mercenary company. This first book focuses on her adventures of learning the ropes of being a soldier and the engagements her company get tangled up in. Along the way, Elizabeth Moon starts introducing the readers to the world she's created. While it's not the grand epic of Tolkein or Martin, I actually appreciate the rather lighter and more accessible nature of this by comparison.
The cast of characters is relatively small as well, with the story really focusing on Paks. That too, for me, is also a pleasant break compared to the heavyweights of fantasy and the hundreds of characters that you have to keep track of as any one of them may be important five books after we meet them. No, this is Paks' story and the other characters the come along serve their purpose in advancing her story.
I had not known until finding the audiobook version that Elizabeth Moon was a Marine before writing this first novel. It certainly shows as her writing provides a lot more detail into the efforts of training and the maneuvers of fighting than I typically see in a fantasy setting.
Overall, it's a solid book, especially for her first one. Probably the biggest weakness is the narrator. She speaks in a very clipped fashion. I can usually listen to audible at 1.25x speed without it having an impact on the reading quality. However, with this narrator, I had to slow it down to 1x speed to make sense of her. Audible has some very strong women narrator's, unfortunately, this book didn't draw one of them. Still, it wasn't bad enough for me to write off the series. In truth, the story remains interesting enough that I plan to go through the other two books again and most likely pick up the later novels set in this world.
The audio book is not better than the print book, but you all know why I buy audio books, because you do too. It is lovely to be 'read to', and Jennifer is a very good reader.
Paks and Stammel are equally endearing to me, but this is very much Paks's story. Stammel is her mentor and 'big brother', and both are great. Paks is a bit of an idiot in this book, and a bit prissy, but she is a heroine and grows up incredibly fast.
She reads the temperament and mood of the characters. While Moon is a great writer of atmosphere and mood, Jennifer lights it all up and brings it to the top.
I don't want to spoil anything, but Paks's big drama at the Duke's stronghold was a little heartwrenching. Very little in these books makes one laugh, but there are plenty of warm fuzzy moments too :)
Read this after The Legacy of Gird for maximum understanding of the main religion of the stories.
I've read and reread all of these books a number of times, and just keep coming back. I highly recommend them to anyone who likes strong female characters, fantasy, and warm fuzzies. It's idealistic and uplifting, but it has its darkness as well, which keeps it from being silly....well, too silly.
Sci-fi/Fantasy geek :)
Engine problems, because it never got started. Or better yet, barely got started by the end. The overall feel of "didn't go anywhere" of the book applies to the writing all along the way. There is a ton of description about meaningless stuff that doesn't lead anywhere. I really like detailed descriptions if they actually mean something to the characters or storyline, but this writer writes detailed descriptions about meaningless things, then flies through things that should be meaningful. If you like knowing that someone was "walking West along a wall that ran Southeast against the North side of the city perpendicular to the East-West crossing", then this is the book for you. I don't mind this kind of description if it ties into the story, or is going to be a long battle, or has some general purpose, but it didn't.
The narration is almost adequate. Better than just being read to, mostly.
If the whole book were like the last 20%, it would have been much better. There are lots of ways to get to know characters and tell their backstory without having to labor through it.
Both versions are superb.
This is a unique feeling story in a Tolkien like world. It follows an honorable mercenary girl who ends up in a heroes story despite setbacks. It has a great system for military campaigns and war that is matched by a unique system of magic. If you like good authors and series like WOT or Magician (Feist), then this will be a purchase that you won't regret.
Lets see, I like Science Fiction, Fantasy and anything that lets me live another life for a little while; so immersion is key.
yes, the story was engaging, it kept me coming back for more and I stayed interested.
Maybe a sword fighting book that focuses more on action and militaristic styles of writhing.
I would have preferred a faster narration with more passion put into the voices, almost like they were the ones living the characters.
Not really it made me feel like I would any other day, it happens to be a little dry if you are not interested in a militaristic style of writing.
I was an okay book and I plan on getting the next one in the series just to see if she really sticks it to her dad.