Good story line. The concept is great, but author put far too much sex in, and it wasn't even good sex!
The narrarator sucked she sound like she Reba Mcentire when she says wwhhyy.
The story was so slow I wanted to listen to something else not a western where sugar cubes where like gold and women in the story are victims of human trafficking and turned into whores ( don't get excited PG book). Finally the end was near an it had a cliff hanger on the main characters twin sister, so I skipped a couple of books to Trackers story and it wasn't like I missed anything because that book caught you up. and it has a way better narrator.
It was predictable heroine and her hero.
She sounded like a child and I was so glad she was replaced in later series.
No to blaring I listen while cleaning. This book was mostly PG.
I don't usually complain about books, any book, but this one is pretty bad. I am two hours into listening to this one and I am ready to give up. It has a good premise and interesting, likable characters but the author is moving so slow it is actually putting me to sleep. I won't be ordering any more from this series.
This is one of the books that make everyone think they can write. This book is nothing but porn, and very poorly done. Even porn could be written better. people who live unnatural lives.
Start with a story that hasn't been done before this one. Then include a more normal type and amount of actual sex scenes and not every other paragraph.
This one was very flat. Most people can read, but to do it for others to listen to, they need to learn inflection and tonal nuances.
I make notes on authors and readers that I don't like and do not buy them anymore.
A more believable plot
I would just say that her style doesn't do anything for me.
don't know, I've given up half way thru.
I Bought it based upon some rave reviews. I guess they enjoyed this line of fiction more than I.
Someone who doesn't care about a good story.
Anything that isn't from this author
She did the best she could with this horrible story
If I was the editor, this terrible book would of never of been published.
I like romance novels, but this one is unlistenable. The main female character Desi, is so stupid and unlikeable. I cannot image anyone able to relate to her. The premise of the story is awful. I can't even hang in there for the sex scenes. Don't get this book, you will regret it like I have. What can I say besides....horrible.
This book was just Ok, that's the best I can say about it. It was the first in the series I listened to and I am not in the least bit interested in any of the others in the series.
The female lead character was unimpressive as a person -- at turns whiny and then "daring." The lead male was taciturn while having few interesting thoughts of his own. How dull. There does exist a formula for writing an engaging erotic romance, but the author seemed to have skipped a few essential steps in the plotline, here. Instead, we hear what seems to be wholesale repetition of the same whiny prose.
The book itself was really good. But the narration was absolutely HORRIBLE!!! She made most of the male characters sound like dim witted idiots and Cain just sounded plain creepy. My skin actually crawled during the love scenes. I'm sorry I wasted the credit.