The reading was so childish and annoying, it is hard to rate the story. We don't need
every voice to be unique, reader. Remember it was written as a novel, not a play.
Yes, if it is narrated by another reader.
Not unless she has had a drastic change in style.
An inconsistent mess. I could be a good story line, but the details were just non-sense. The heroin rides a 1974 BMW motorcycle with 110hp. In 1974 the top of the line was an ugly R90S with 67hp. A tire track was found and determined to belong to a Ford F150, and the BS goes on and on....