This book had a very good premise but it never really developed into a great story. At times it was too wordy with too much description and at other times, conflict was wrapped up too quickly and neatly. It seemed like all the characters were behaving because of their reaction to love but so much was left unsaid. Why did Zack become so passionately involved with such illegal activity? Why did he turn on Ridley? What was so bad in Ace's life to make him turn to addiction? Why was Ridley's father so steadfastly naive? And why did Ridley herself make such poor choices? The characters seemed to have extreme behaviors but we never really learned enough about them to understand their actions.
The combination of narrator, who sounds like she is reading aloud to a kindergarten class, and the writing which is full of cliches and is unnecessarily descriptive, makes this book almost unbearable.
The main character is uninteresting. She's the stranger that you get stuck next to on a long plane trip who just won't stop talking. Her pseudo-philosophizing is naive and childish - though it doesn't seem to be the author's intention that the character should come across this way.
The main character, Ridley, talks to the reader throughout the book, saying things like, "I know what you're thinking". It's very irritating because she seems to assume that the readers are as unintelligent and one dimensional as she is.
"I know what you're thinking". Oh, really? Because, what I was thinking was, "This book is pretty bad!"
This book is slow - slow as a two legged dog with a thick curly black coat of medium length that is starting to grey a bit and whose perfectly round hazel eyes suggest somehow that he is wiser than he lets on. A dog that in his youth could chase a rabbit for nearly a mile with unyielding strength and determination like a hungry prize fighter . . .
Get the idea? The writer's over-use of descriptives and simile bog this book down to the point of being unlistenable. Detail is good when it paints a scene that is relevant to moving the story line or understanding the characters. Hers don't do either, they just drone on without pupose. Skip it.
If you become highly conscious of the writing style, the book is either very well written or very poorly. I had just finished three books by Adrian McKinty and any book would have had a hard time following that act. This one was not a gentle letdown, however.
Forget this book if you care about literature (or entertainment for that matter). Buy one of the McKinty books if you have not done so already.
If Ridley look at herself in the mirror and realized something one more time I was going to lose it. This writer was like listening to someone that likes to hear the sound of their own voice. I wonder if all the excruciating detail was an excuse to fill pages.
I loved the way the author asked questions of us, the readers, when explaining certain circumstances. I tend to think that way myself and this is the first I've seen it in authors work.
Great story, never a dull moment!
This book may have a confusing beginning, but once it starts the ball just keeps on rolling all the way until the end. So many different twist one would have never thought of. If you like mystery and thrillers this book is meant for you.
Couldn't get into this at all, pretty much sucked. I read another Lisa Unger book, it was better but just OK.
The narrator and the story itself
Yes. It was interested how the author uncovered the secret incrementally.
Jake - he was truely the victim of the system as well as the power driven characters in the book
The way Ridley's mom was treated by men in general. Made me feel sorry for her.
Lisa Unger is a great author.
The plot is interesting and the narrator has an educated accent and nice voice. I enjoyed this listen very much. Only in the final conclusion does it get a bit corny/predictable, but the overall experience was very positive! Thanks!