I felt this book's story had so much potential but was written in a very disjointed manner. This would have been a great deal better had it not been written in present tense.
The only thing good about this book was the sale price. I would have been upset if I'd paid full price for such a collection of drivel. The author makes up with synonyms what he lacks in plot or character development. It's like listening to someone read a Thesaurus, with a bit of gratuitous sex and violence thrown in when the diarrheal flow of words begins to dry up.
I kept hoping it would get better..... or at least not get any worse. I was wrong.
This was the most disappointing book I have read in a very long time. I feel completely cheated. After Fight Club I really thought I was in for a great read. In a word: not. Please don't waste your time. I feel so strongly about this book that it is the first I have even written a review, but I felt I had to get the word out: STAY AWAY!