Don't know what I want to be when I grow up. Trip's cool though. Use Audible to make gym-training sane... And rip my imagination.
I wrote a totally thoughtful, meaningful, world-class and insightful review of this book. Really took time to point out that this is really two novels in one with the second part a novel-like epilogue... sort of a bonus psychological suspense book. The characters are interesting, but I had some reservations and discussed them in a nuanced fashion that would have totally helped you enjoy Brian Freeman kick off the adventures of Detective Jonathan Stride.
It would have encouraged you to particularly enjoy the way Freeman deals with the human condition in an engaging dispassionate way. And then, after writing this masterpiece that recommended the book and Joe Barrett's reading (in spite of his challenge with female voices) I um... er...went to the preview of that review. Edited it tightly and... and... forgot to press"Submit Review"... And the greatest review you've never read went away :-)
Anywayzzz... I liked "Immoral" enough to download the next in this series "Stripper" which I did save. Sigh...
This is an okay book, but it gets lost in the side plots a couple of times and even decides to introduce a new set of characters and locations more than halfway through the book, which I seldom find to be a good sign. You can find prime examples of at least six of the seven deadly sins here, missing only gluttony. We have people committing murder, kidnapping, rape, adultery in several forms including with their "minister", their stepdaughter, and their coworkers. There is a woman that pulls the getting pregnant trick twice to force men to marry and take care of her. Lust, envy, wrath, and pride run rampant. Lots of misdirection and lapses in logic to annoy those that like their books to make some sort of imperical sense mean slight deductions to the overall score.
This is an okay story and the good reader make this worth purchasing. Do NOT listen to it on the car radio with young listeners or unrelated members of the opposite sex in the car. There are some rather graphic scenes of a sexual nature that would embarrass those with a semi developed sense of morality.
The book was slow to start but entertaining overall; however, the ending dropped it a full notch for me. It wasn't the unusual, perhaps unexpected, ending but Strider's reaction, or lack of action, towards it. The Strider character has now lost a lot of credibility with me for failing to properly deal with a stupid, clingy, whining character! (Trying not to give anything away in wording.). Just made me almost mad....
This author really does a good job of creating twists and turns in his stories. This is the 3rd novel I've listened to by him. I have to admit that early on in the novel, I had an inkling of what was going on, but then I forgot about it with all the other plot twists.
He also seems to have a lot of fun creating characters and scenarios.
Pretty good detective novel. Nice cast of characters. The protagonist was a very likable person. It kept you thinking. Was tough to determine who did it. Hard to believe that it was his first novel. I will definitely read more.
The story was good! Fun references to Minnesoota, especially if you have been to Dulooth. Excessive Minnesota accent for multiple characters distracting from a good plot.
Yes, I enjoyed the story. It was a good mystery that was well paced, driving the story to its conclusion.
I thought the ending could have been a lot better. There's no need to make all of the major events be tied directly to the main character.
He did the male characters well. His female voices were very weirdly done.
There were a lot of graphic sex scenes that were unnecessary to move the story along and honestly, they were clumsy. He would bounce between proper names for body parts followed by some pretty base slang. It was the kind of sex a 16 year old boy might write and there were far too many of them. More than anything else, this reduced my enjoyment of the story because implied sex would have served the story just as well and we wouldn't have been forced to listen to the narrator struggle through poorly written sex scenes.
I bought this book because its set in my hometown of Duluth, MN
I have a long commute twice a day and no longer have time to read for fun. I can listen to audio books. This narrator did a great job.
I enjoyed the story and was unable to guess the ending. My only quibble is that the author used Duluth, MN as the setting but then didn't use the language unique to the city. For example, he called the boats 'ships.' That is a true mark of a transplant to the city.This is a tiny complaint, as the story was well done and held my attention from beginning to end. I will buy the rest of his series.
Well researched thrillers Chriton-esque. Nonfiction: Science, medical, biography, "self-help" meta cognitive sub-genre, memoir, philosophy..
May start a bit slow... Worth sticking with it
The narrator - shudder. He is awful with female characters. A credit to the plot, writing and characters that I did not halt my first book by this author. I now note, SLIGHT improvement in other books - same narrator/author, but still pathetic. Drift off a second? Good luck knowing whether the male or female characters are speaking! Still worth the journey.
I don't know about you, but why are there so so so many 5 star reviews. I LOVE books, but so few are 5 star.
Good book, entertaining, not as fast paced as Bone House, but listened straight through.
It was a little raw at times and that was the only thing that didn't make me rate it at 4 stars. The publisher's summary gives almost nothing away, but does give a good picture of what you can expect story wise. Lots of really unlovable characters. A little graphic sex that was made clear in the end, but otherwise not to offensive.