Take My EX, I'll Take Your Daddy

De: Anastasia Slash, Bella Curvy

Narrado por: Virtual Voice

Duración: 2 h y 35 m

Resumen del Editor

I knew I shouldn't have any feelings for him, but the situation was too wild to ignore. When I received a wedding invitation, I was shocked to see that my ex was getting married. While I should have been upset, a part of me was tempted to attend the wedding.

My friends encouraged me to enjoy myself, meet someone new, and lose my virginity. I had an incredible evening with a billionaire, and I couldn't stop smiling.

However, there was a major issue. The billionaire wanted an heir, and it turns out he is my ex's future father-in-law!

Must have been a very early book

the girl is immature and I can't figure out what was so wonderful about her. the book is 80% sex; having, thinking about, and being asked about sex. I was extremely disappointed. this has to be a very early book, before she knew to write a book with depth.

All over the place

The story had potential but this butcher job was absolutely atrocious. name mess ups, repeats with slite deviations in the story, just off the wall crap thrown in towards the end.

All over all over the place, repeated stories for out of order, rewritten and rewarded constantly

I do not recommend until it has been edited and cleaned up. How’s a good storyline if you can untangled the spaghetti of the way it has been written.

the writter may have onset dementia

the story skips info and repeats the same scenes in same chapters, it's like the writter either has some serious memory issues or some sort of A.D.D., you'd think the proof reader would of pointed out the OBVIOUS red flags of the story its like 3 separate storyline within 1 micro novel....the base of the story has potential, it's the delivery of that story that was terrible, so confusingat 1 point i had to start it over thinking I missed something, it wasn't me that's for sure.

The worst thing I’ve encountered on here

I have nearly 500 books in my library on here, and have listened to many more and this is the absolute worst, don’t waste your time…

Happy this book was free!

Terrible book. The story is not consistent. The book is not professionally written, so silly, I thank God I listen while working. No more virtual reads for me.

Listens like it’s written by an AI

Either this is written by multiple authors that don’t collaborate or read each other’s work or it’s pure AI fiction. It reads like an early AI app, retelling the same points in different ways then acting like they didn’t happen at all. The main character went through telling the love interest about her ex after already telling him about it. It reads like 2 people in a whirlwind romance that both have multiple personalities, and the personalities don’t even know about each other or realize they are not the only personality because they have a semblance of knowledge about most of the events in their alts life. Idk. My head hurts.